Your resume is well laid out and demonstrates relevant experience as an applicant for the emergency room RN. The following comments are excerpts from my peer evaluation form:
Cover Letter Evaluation:
– Positional values mentioned in the first paragraph were well worded! I would add the hospital’s overall mission into your introduction as well.
– I would add a few more skills specifically demonstrated in the ER that are not typical of other RN roles or opportunity for growth within the unit.
– Layout looks great!
– As mentioned before, I think adding your own goals through the organization would demonstrate you are eager to grow and remain with the organization long term.
Resume Evaluation:
– I would make your name larger to make it stand out more!
– The one area I would rephrase is the Other Work Experience: since the dates are already included, I would rephrase the following under the “Counter Server/Food Prep” instead of stating “I spent six consecutive summers taking orders…” I would state “Attending tables, providing timely food delivery and ensuring customer satisfaction.”
– Certifications and relative experience were all noted within the first section of the resume.
– I would rephrase a few sections, under Medical Scribe, I would write “Acclimated to a rotating schedule within a small practice, assisting anesthesiologists, nurse practitioners, and physicians in patient rooming and accurately obtaining vitals and recording patient visits.”
I would also rephrase the second Scribe position to state “Medical Scribe Manager, Scribe America…”
A managerial promotion is a huge plus and should stand out more on your resume! The duties listed below should be reworded to support your managerial role position.
– Well organized and balanced layout.
– Clinical Rotation section not listed under a separate page.
rfenwick
Heather,
Your resume is extensive and demonstrates that you have good experience and skills relevant for an emergency department nurse! I wonder if you could play around with font size and bolding titles to make job titles stand out more since they are important!
Your cover letter was well written, but I think you could make it a little more personalized to you and to the specific job you are applying. I would also add a paragraph about some of your work experience and not just nursing school; its all relevant!
apotter8
Heather- this is an extremely well organized resume that is readable, applicable and very well formatted for this position! This cover letter highlights your skills and qualifications but could use a bit more of personalizing so that when the hiring manager walks away from your application, they can remember you specifically so that you get the job! Overall, great work!
Nikki Denison
Heather,
Your resume is well laid out and demonstrates relevant experience as an applicant for the emergency room RN. The following comments are excerpts from my peer evaluation form:
Cover Letter Evaluation:
– Positional values mentioned in the first paragraph were well worded! I would add the hospital’s overall mission into your introduction as well.
– I would add a few more skills specifically demonstrated in the ER that are not typical of other RN roles or opportunity for growth within the unit.
– Layout looks great!
– As mentioned before, I think adding your own goals through the organization would demonstrate you are eager to grow and remain with the organization long term.
Resume Evaluation:
– I would make your name larger to make it stand out more!
– The one area I would rephrase is the Other Work Experience: since the dates are already included, I would rephrase the following under the “Counter Server/Food Prep” instead of stating “I spent six consecutive summers taking orders…” I would state “Attending tables, providing timely food delivery and ensuring customer satisfaction.”
– Certifications and relative experience were all noted within the first section of the resume.
– I would rephrase a few sections, under Medical Scribe, I would write “Acclimated to a rotating schedule within a small practice, assisting anesthesiologists, nurse practitioners, and physicians in patient rooming and accurately obtaining vitals and recording patient visits.”
I would also rephrase the second Scribe position to state “Medical Scribe Manager, Scribe America…”
A managerial promotion is a huge plus and should stand out more on your resume! The duties listed below should be reworded to support your managerial role position.
– Well organized and balanced layout.
– Clinical Rotation section not listed under a separate page.
rfenwick
Heather,
Your resume is extensive and demonstrates that you have good experience and skills relevant for an emergency department nurse! I wonder if you could play around with font size and bolding titles to make job titles stand out more since they are important!
Your cover letter was well written, but I think you could make it a little more personalized to you and to the specific job you are applying. I would also add a paragraph about some of your work experience and not just nursing school; its all relevant!
apotter8
Heather- this is an extremely well organized resume that is readable, applicable and very well formatted for this position! This cover letter highlights your skills and qualifications but could use a bit more of personalizing so that when the hiring manager walks away from your application, they can remember you specifically so that you get the job! Overall, great work!